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Eden2.0 by nelena
by nelena

This is my first critique, so I'm not entirely sure how well I'll do here. I love the background, the clarity of everything, very well ...

Okay, I have two things to say... One, sorry for not posting in God knows how long, and two, for those who don't like my anger and how I can sometimes get forceful over stupid things... You're likely not someone who's never actually had me try to force them to do something. Or someone who says "no" to more things than I do but have never talked to me. Also, this is going to be a dual subject entry.

Anyway, me and one of my more distant friends have recently talked, and I'm going to show you our convo. Note: He's a he, just using a female name cuz he wants to become a she. I might've explained this before, I'm not sure.

Fyre Ireland
Hey

Jenny Hency
Hi

Fyre Ireland
Wanna know all Skyrim easter eggs?

Jenny Hency
Later? I'm not in the best of mood

Fyre Ireland
What's up?

Jenny Hency
A boy just pissed me off so bad. you?

Fyre Ireland
Listening to one of the bands referenced in Skyrim. How'd he piss you off?

Jenny Hency
A boy 'let me down gently' because he was scared that his mother would be angry with him and send him to military school (Which she did indeed threaten him with) 
and that was all fine and dandy, but he just made a post that discredited me completely and I feel so unimportant and I'm trying not to cry and ugh.

Fyre Ireland
*Holds you* I'm here, dude...

Jenny Hency
-hugs tightly- thank you

Fyre Ireland
Wanna know my advice for the situation?

Jenny Hency
Yeah, what is it?

Fyre Ireland
Smart thing to do: Talk it out with someone, get your pain off your chest.
Pained thing to do: Let the bastard know how you feel, and if feels nothing, kick his ass out of your life. Block everything of his you can, get rid of it all.
What I'd do: Both.

Jenny Hency
I commented on the post and removed him. I also warned the new person that he's done it to people before me and I was just stupid enough to believe he was truthful to me of all people.

Fyre Ireland
Along the same lines but not as brutal as I can be.

Jenny Hency
I didn't block him because I want to wait to see if he apologizes, so I can tell him to fuck off. I want the last word.

Fyre Ireland
Ahh.
I know how you feel. You know how I can sometimes get out of hand myself, right?

Jenny Hency
You seem to be strong though, you can get emotional, but the way you go about things seems so.... well.

Fyre Ireland
Let me ask you this.... Do you use your anger to fuel the things you do, the things you say to people that have hurt you?

Jenny Hency
I hardly get angry, I mean, I'm not as angry now as I want to be. I was fuming for a whole five seconds and now I'm just upset.

Fyre Ireland
I don't seem angry unless someone pissed me off in an obvious way. But, in truth, I'm almost always angry about something, and I use it when people hurt me. I hurt them as badly as they've hurt me, maybe worse. It's not the best or smartest thing, but it's fun, and it makes them think fucking twice.

Fyre Ireland
Sorry if what I said seems off subject. Basically, I'm strong and confident because of my anger. Because of the shit things that have happened to me. What makes others give up on things only makes me determined more on finding the right person/thing for said... Yeah.

Jenny Hency
It's on subject
I'm just trying to put together what I want to say. 
I miss Jack alot more than I feel anything for this guy though. If that says anything

Fyre Ireland
It does. And the cool-but-assholeish Jack we both know?

Jenny Hency
Yeah.
I wouldn't have used his name if it was otherwise.

Fyre Ireland
Ahh, I just needed to make sure. You'll probably miss him for a long time, but life goes on. Gotta try hard not to forget that. Time passes by faster than you think. Especially when you have no sense of time.

Jenny Hency
It's honestly been a long time. Such a long time.

Fyre Ireland
How long is long?

Jenny Hency
A year since we were a couple, like, two months since he blocked me

Fyre Ireland
Damn, man.
Well, in time, when you find someone better, you'll be able to let go of the past... I hope.

Jenny Hency
I'm sweating so badly but I'm hiding my face from fam with the hooe
hood

Fyre Ireland
You'll get through this. Trust me, life could always be shittier.

Jenny Hency
I read something somewhere that said, "It isn't about how much you're going through, it's about how much you can actually take"

Fyre Ireland
Interesting... We all take more than we can handle at some point. Or at least it seems like that.

Jenny Hency
You know magic and witchcraft stuff right? About Equivalent exchange I hope?

Fyre Ireland
Kinda, yeah.

Jenny Hency
Well, I used to be really really into that stuff, but I think it's the reason our relationship crumbled.
I think that he's my soul mate and I lost him miserably for trying to fuck with reality.

Fyre Ireland
I'm not gonna lie, when you asked, I thought to myself, "Why do I have a feeling that question's going to lead to a horrible choice/decision?" cuz I thought you were gonna ask me to do something with magic.

Jenny Hency
No. I wouldn't

Fyre Ireland
Thank god, cuz I wouldn't have.
But, now I'm curious, what kind of magic were you trying to use? Necromancy? Pyromancy?

Jenny Hency
I don't know it's a long and complicated religious deal. It was mainly psychological because the religion explains witchcraft as 'in the mind' and it effects the universe a way that it's the human mind that's altered whether yours or someone else's.

Fyre Ireland
Sounds like Wicca...

Jenny Hency
not exactly, but I guess it might be similar

Fyre Ireland
Ahh. Well, if that ruined the relationship, then in my opinion, you don't need his ass. If your interests, no matter how fucked up, are things the other person doesn't want in their life, doesn't want to deal with them, then you don't need them.

Jenny Hency
I feel like you're wrong. It feels like a piece of me is torn away and even before he blocked me, I felt like he was falling away, and I failed to keep him in my life even then because I said something, a single thing out of emotion that I shouldn't have said.

Fyre Ireland
That's your opinion. If you really wanna waste time lingering in the past about a single person, that's your choice. I look back at my past from time to time, recall some good and bad times, but I ultimately move on, even if it seems like I'm not doing a damn thing with my life.
I give my opinion, give my advice, but I can't make anyone do anything.

Jenny Hency
I dont know what to say

Fyre Ireland
A few people don't when I say something like that. But I have one last thing to say... If he doesn't want you in his life, then, again, you don't need him. If he blocked you, kicked your ass out, then he's a royal dick. A royal asshole. A royal every-cuss-word-insult I can think of. You're weird, we're all weird, but you're also an awesome dude. We may not talk much, and there are some things you do, or have tried to do, that go to extremes, but I go to extremes as well. You're an awesome dude, and you deserve better.

Jenny Hency
Thank you *hugs*

Fyre Ireland
*hug* We all have our weird, fucked up things we enjoy. If people can't accept that of you, then you don't need them. God knows I have mine that weird people out.

Jenny Hency
Id be willing to give it all up for love.

Fyre Ireland
A lot of people are willing to give everything up for love... However, thanks to one old relationship, I realize how stupid that is. Why the hell should I change everything about myself just to give one person what they want? Now, a few minor things is perfectly fine, but the major shit? No.

Jenny Hency
People do stupid things for love. Its a really old phrase

Fyre Ireland
That's true, but I, for one, refuse to be stupid for love... Being stupid just for fun or for the hell of things, sure, but not for love.
For me, there are times where ignorance is bliss, but other times where I need to know shit.

Jenny Hency
Alright. Im not completely sure what to think

Yeah, there's a mix of things in that convo. I honestly think I'm right about the things in there. One thing I didn't touch is the reversal, though... See, when me and Storm went through our shit, and I tried kicking her out, it was hard... And, eventually I took her back... But, what if I wanted her back and she said no to it? That's where things would be different to this day. I think things would be better for my friend if it was the reversal... If Jack wanted him back, but he says no to Jack's worthless ass. Now, I am still friends with Jack, I do talk to him from time to time, but I don't get all that personal with him. He doesn't open up, and neither do I... Much, anyway.

NOW onto the next subject... Me explaining who/what Vlad is... Those who have read have seen him pop up in a few convos. Some people are gonna think I'm crazy, others are gonna think I'm letting my imagination go too far, and another group of others will just accept what I say and believe me, think of how real it possibly could be, so on, and the last group of others will say I'm bullshitting you/that I'm just fucking with everyone. Whatever you think, I don't give a damn. There are a few stories where the author speaks for himself, saying it's all real and he just uses fake names for it and shit. We have our doubts, but there is the possibility that it is all real, such as the things in Cirque Du Freak.

Vlad is a spirit. Not a ghost, or a lost soul, but an emotional spirit, an extension of myself. Remember the empath post? Well, that kinda goes into this... I see spirits-- emotional spirits-- that are forms that only certain people can see, hear, feel, smell, or taste... I could have said "do anything involving the five senses with" but one, that sounds weird, and two, I guess you could consider this spirit sight my sixth sense, or empathy my sixth sense and this my seventh sense... Everyone has some kind of sixth sense, and it can create a seventh, depending on how strong it is...

Vlad: Anyway... Now for me to take over the explanation. Emotional spirits are a manifestation of one's strongest emotions and desires. For example, I'm basically Jeff's anger, love, sadness, about everything, really... Me and Jeff are practically brothers who think and feel basically the same way about a lot of things, but we do have opinion differences on some things. We do sometimes piss each other off. But we're still close. Really close. Just because most others can't see, feel, or hear me (those are the senses that matter most) doesn't mean I don't exist.

Exactly what he said. Hell, my girlfriend can see the same kind of spirits. She has some that are as close to her as me and Vlad are to each other. But, that only partially explains it... These spirits are also supernatural beings. Sometimes by the book, by definition, other times, not so much. Well... Some are human spirits, but they're not normal humans... They're either spirits of a person who actually has a body, who is a person everyone can see, or they have a physical alteration... Anyway, Vlad is a vampire spirit, but not one by the book. At least none I've read.

Vlad: Do I need to drink blood? Yeah, but I can eat normal foods and drink normal drinks on a daily basis. As well as drink normal drinks on a regular basis. And I know some people are gonna assume I mean eating physical things, making foods and drinks float around people. Those who imagine that are dumbasses who don't understand. There's an entire universe inside inside this physically existing universe for emotional spirits. When we're not with those who can see us-- not with our physical family-- we're in one of the spiritual worlds. And those who have honed the sight well enough can send their own emotional spirit into the spirit world they most relate to.

Yeah, pretty much what he said. And continuing onto the explanation... When one sends their own spirit, themself as an emotional spirit to the spirit world, they still have full control over their body, able to act like nothing's happening while also able to what's going on in the spirit world. Like, right now, me and my girlfriend have our spirit forms in the spirit world right now, and we're on a date, but I'm also typing up this entry and she's asleep. Well, at least I think she is, she could wake up kinda soon since she's five hours ahead of me and it's about 6:20am there.

Vlad: And us emotional spirits have normal lives. Well, kinda... Sometimes we go on crazy adventures that seem only possible in sci-fi and fantasy stories, but regardless... We date, we have sex, we have kids, we make choices that impact our lives, we can die of normal causes depending on what we are supernaturally. Some have horrible shit happen to them, whether be a change to their appearance, a change in their love life, a change to whatever. I mean I've been married before, I have an ex wife, and it sucks I can't be friends with her, or see the children we've had together anymore, but I've moved on.

He really has, but the reason he left her was mostly because of me. Remember when I mentioned that ex that I was with for three years? Yeah. She had the same spirit power as me, and when I left her, Vlad left his love who was one of her spirits.

Vlad: But I've still moved on. I have a new love, we just recently had a son. I love her, and we love our son, even if the harpy-vampire blood gives him the thirst for the kill...

To sum everything on this subject up, I can see a new form of life that most others can't. I can interact with them and talk to them like they're normal people, because they ARE normal people, normal in their own way. There will be the non-believers, there will people who believe but can't see, people who believe cuz they CAN see like me, and people who think I'm just making this shit up and trying to get attention. Oh, and I kinda called Becky waking up soon, it's now 6:30 there and she's awake, and I'm talking to her!

Well, anyway, that's all on my mind now. Until next thoughts my readers and supporters!

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Jeff Ireland
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Note: Everyone on my friend's list on here are people I watch.

Welcome to my profile, which has some stories and pics and such I've made. For anyone who reads my stories, please note this: I give descriptions of one of the main character's looks with a simple action for an intro. Why? Because I fucking hate it when how the character looks is a fucking mystery! But, I only detail the important characters, I don't really bother with secondaries or extras. I don't have my stories edited until after they're finished. If I notice typos or mistakes are pointed out to me before it's done, I fix those, but my general grammar stays until the story's done. For anyone who knows me, you know I'm one for blunt, uncensored content. I don't think shit should be censored, and I fucking hate it when people try to tell me what the fuck to write. I mean seriously, if you don't like it, don't fucking read it. I'm not looking for popularity, I'm looking for people actually enjoying the stories. If you don't enjoy my blunt, uncut language and sexual content, then my stories aren't for you. Yeah, I don't read that many books, the most I read is text on my computer screen, which is usually YouTube comments, Facebook stuff, and roleplay text. My English isn't that good, but in truth, whose fucking is? Seriously. For anyone continuing to read after this, first off, WOW! Second off, yeah, I'm petty much a blunt person/writer. Writing's a hobby of mine, much like roleplaying. I find it fun, and like it when people enjoy my work. Sometimes I take comments and reviews into consideration, other times I don't give a fuck. It's nice when people like my work, I know I'm gonna get hate for some of the shit I write, but I don't fucking care. Okay, thank you for your time to read my entire profile.
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Thank you! Be on look out for my fifth journal entry!
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Thank you for the fave on my Steampunk Flight image! :)
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what do you think of this new art style? aghast
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Thank you for all the :iconfav3dplz:'S .
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I sent an angel to watch over you last night but it came back.
I asked "why?"
The angel said "angels don't watch over angels."
Twenty one angels are IN your world. Ten of them are sleeping, Ten are playing, one is reading this message.
Send this to ten friends including me. I guess if I don't get it back I'm not one of them. As soon as you get five replies, someone you love will quietly surprise you.
Please read, not joking. God has seen you struggling with something. God says its over. A blessing is coming your way.
If you believe in God send this message on. Please don't ignore it. You are being tested. God is going to fix two things BIG tonight in your favor. DROP Everything and pass it on. Tomorrow will be the best day of your life. Don't break this chain.
Send to 14 friends in 10 minutes. It's not that hard. )
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If you were killed, I wouldn't be at your funeral…because I'd be in jail for killing the person that killed you!!!!!! We are true friends we ride together/we die together.
Send this to everyone you care about including me if you care. See how many times you get this! I want you to know that you are amazing and you are my friend until my death and forever. If I don't get this back, I understand. But I have a game for you, once you read this letter, you must send it to 15 people, including the person who sent it to you. If you receive at least 3 back, you are loved. Nobody knows how important something is until……they lose it. Tonight right an 12am the person you like will realize they love you! Then something is going to happen to you between 1am & 2pm be ready for the greatest shock of your life. If you break this chain you are going to have bad luck with love.
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